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Percy

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Percy Jackson everyone~
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hello~ First time doing a critique, so I'm sorry if I sound stupid~ <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/y/a/y…" alt=":iconyayprussiaplz:" title="yayprussiaplz" />
I think that the legs should be just a bit thicker, maybe work on a little anatomy some more. Other than that, it's great! The folds of the clothes are fabulous, and I really love your style of eyes. The side of the hand with the pinkie should be a bit more rounded, as well. I like the shading you did on the skin, but maybe try to make it blend in more on that elbow, because it kind of sticks out a bit. Once again, sorry if I sound stupid... I'm only thirteen. <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/f/i/f…" alt=":iconfinallyplz:" title="finallyplz" />